tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post3124169855713204362..comments2024-03-14T17:39:31.935+05:30Comments on Random Scribblings: UnwantedJyoti Mishrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comBlogger99125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-33718589257951950092011-08-15T17:33:09.740+05:302011-08-15T17:33:09.740+05:30I am impressed :)
innocent desires, amongst the wi...I am impressed :)<br />innocent desires, amongst the wild world..aakashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05184064977902565585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-2978239109774673042011-06-21T06:37:46.074+05:302011-06-21T06:37:46.074+05:30Thanks for this thought-provoking post, Jyoti! Tha...Thanks for this thought-provoking post, Jyoti! That last question is so powerful and rings in my mind! Love your writing. =)Samantha Bangayanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126342453185964881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-86432961356490935422011-06-20T07:31:32.055+05:302011-06-20T07:31:32.055+05:30You must be a great observer of people of Jyoti :)...You must be a great observer of people of Jyoti :). A bit of conundrum here. Desires are like goals which inspire us to keep reaching to acieve them. Don't know if they are unwanted. But the kids are definitely NOT unwanted.Gingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10294850491382303707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-19866291590211241262011-06-18T12:48:55.822+05:302011-06-18T12:48:55.822+05:30very touching....very touching....pragyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04688591710560146525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-11024755659553282011-06-17T17:20:16.291+05:302011-06-17T17:20:16.291+05:30You succeeded in entering the minds of some people...You succeeded in entering the minds of some people.A-9ja-Greathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05001926648395384599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-6168194022129724712011-06-16T13:30:38.277+05:302011-06-16T13:30:38.277+05:30jyoti ji
bahut hi jabardast prastuti
bilk...jyoti ji<br /> bahut hi jabardast prastuti <br />bilkul sachchai ko saath liye hue ek ek shabd yatharth ko prastut kar rahe hain .<br />bahut bahut badhai <br />aapki lekhni ko<br /> poonamपूनम श्रीवास्तवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09864127183201263925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-83535669305135198812011-06-16T10:14:54.488+05:302011-06-16T10:14:54.488+05:30Beautiful!. It reminds me about the kids who were ...Beautiful!. It reminds me about the kids who were the inhabitants of the slums where the DB Mall stands now.<br />http://mallar.wordpress.comP.N. Subramanianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01420464521174227821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-31944927175954790352011-06-16T04:50:21.419+05:302011-06-16T04:50:21.419+05:30Beautiful poem, Jyoti, as always! How tragic it is...Beautiful poem, Jyoti, as always! How tragic it is that millions of beautiful children end up feeling unwanted and disappointed because we, the adults, fail to fulfill our duties in an appropriate manner. I wish this child would understand that his dreams are far more valuable than anything/everything in that mall. May he continues to dream...Anjana Dayal de Prewitt (Gudia)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13896147864138128006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-54657357205700124912011-06-16T04:45:06.387+05:302011-06-16T04:45:06.387+05:30this is a very touching poem, it reminded me of my...this is a very touching poem, it reminded me of my childhood. After all, it's the feeling of not getting what you want that makes you desire to jump higher and succeed.Cubicw86https://www.blogger.com/profile/10863622621536177249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-55999932272669925182011-06-15T17:45:47.450+05:302011-06-15T17:45:47.450+05:30very deep .. touchingvery deep .. touchingM VERMAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10122855925525653850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-42882127101959167832011-06-15T14:51:00.815+05:302011-06-15T14:51:00.815+05:30सुंदर कोमल और संवेदनशील भाव बेहद खूबसूरत रचना!सुंदर कोमल और संवेदनशील भाव बेहद खूबसूरत रचना!Sawai Singh Rajpurohithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14297388415522127345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-51994819595005900252011-06-15T13:21:57.502+05:302011-06-15T13:21:57.502+05:30Jyoti, did you see the wiki pedia Link? :) it wrot...Jyoti, did you see the wiki pedia Link? :) it wrote exactly what you said the reason for having gap year in India :)Toni Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04172989602927219169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-9124309162742163212011-06-15T12:01:53.310+05:302011-06-15T12:01:53.310+05:30@Neeraj, @devendra, @digambar, @vijay, @marie, @da...@Neeraj, @devendra, @digambar, @vijay, @marie, @david, @G N Shaw, @preml, @abhishek: thank you !!!<br /><br />@Didi: welcome here. Thanks for the comment.<br /><br />@Kelvin, @rajneesh, @sumeet: thank u guys for the comments. <br /><br />@zeal: thank you mam for this comment. <br /><br />@smartindian, @sachin, @Dr. Sharad, @beyond horizon, @arti, @vivek: thanks <br /><br />@shruti, @angel: thanks honey!!!<br /><br />@mahendra: thank u <br /><br />@Kailash C Sharma: yeah u r right. Sometimes it’s just beyond you to tolerate it. <br /><br />@cher greean: thanks<br /><br />@Dr. Varsha: thank u mam <br /><br />@kunwar: thank u sir!!!<br /><br />@rajesh, @babli, @zakir: thank u so much.Jyoti Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01794675170127168298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-57776575321204715322011-06-15T09:53:32.212+05:302011-06-15T09:53:32.212+05:30नाइस पोस्ट।
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ये शानदार मौका...
यहाँ खु...नाइस पोस्ट।<br /><br />---------<br /><a href="http://sb.samwaad.com/" rel="nofollow">ये शानदार मौका... </a><br /><b><a href="http://ts.samwaad.com/" rel="nofollow">यहाँ खुदा है, वहाँ खुदा है... </a></b>Dr. Zakir Ali Rajnishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03629318327237916782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-28339937981701984562011-06-15T09:07:42.791+05:302011-06-15T09:07:42.791+05:30Very beautiful and touching poem. You have painted...Very beautiful and touching poem. You have painted the whole scenario in such a interesting way that the poem is really mind-blowing and I feel its one of your best poem. The picture is fantastic and expresses a lot.Urmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11444733179920713322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-89949433370257894382011-06-15T08:45:16.532+05:302011-06-15T08:45:16.532+05:30Wonderful and very much thought provioking.Wonderful and very much thought provioking.Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325697671806865458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-9813047039903738462011-06-15T08:11:58.403+05:302011-06-15T08:11:58.403+05:30and by comparison of friends, i was just basing it...and by comparison of friends, i was just basing it as a reflection of their upbringing of which culture they are in. that is, asian & western :)Toni Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04172989602927219169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-33554993114248752552011-06-15T08:09:47.601+05:302011-06-15T08:09:47.601+05:30hey jyoti
replied! :)hey jyoti <br />replied! :)Toni Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04172989602927219169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-44137623286401329182011-06-15T07:37:39.737+05:302011-06-15T07:37:39.737+05:30hi jyoti :)
regarding your comment, i dont think ...hi jyoti :)<br /><br />regarding your comment, i dont think so.. as you would see the comparison of friends i made in my post the other side of the world apparently thinks differently and sometimes even encourage gap years.<br /><br />in europe it is also very common, thus they call it "gap year" ;)<br /><br />http://chickbud.blogspot.com/2011/06/what-will-our-neighbors-say.htmlToni Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04172989602927219169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-53941490223401791742011-06-15T07:26:32.575+05:302011-06-15T07:26:32.575+05:30You write very beautifully.This was touching and i...You write very beautifully.This was touching and impressive.Kunwar Kusumeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15923076883936293963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-50854943777291582532011-06-15T02:13:15.995+05:302011-06-15T02:13:15.995+05:30hey jyoti! :)
i replied to your comment :))
ht...hey jyoti! :) <br /><br /> i replied to your comment :))<br /><br />http://chickbud.blogspot.com/2011/06/what-will-our-neighbors-say.htmlToni Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04172989602927219169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-82450617834453122242011-06-14T21:42:17.499+05:302011-06-14T21:42:17.499+05:30Who is more unwanted
These kids
Who undoubtedly
de...Who is more unwanted<br />These kids<br />Who undoubtedly<br />deserves a future brighter <br /> Or<br />Their desires <br />Which are fated <br />To go higher and higher.<br /><br />EXCELLENT EXPRESSIONS..... Dear Jyoti Mishra ! Your writing is superb.Dr Varsha Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02967891150285828074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-33250349587952106452011-06-14T20:50:46.483+05:302011-06-14T20:50:46.483+05:30Very touching poem. Thanks for sharing.Very touching poem. Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-58563305725855897242011-06-14T20:41:18.697+05:302011-06-14T20:41:18.697+05:30very beautiful poem which deeply touches your hear...very beautiful poem which deeply touches your heart..very sensitive narration...who is responsible for crushing their even minor and innocent desires? Some times you feel helpless in this cruel world...Kailash Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12461785093868952476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1216361975349872099.post-79761956611671735082011-06-14T20:20:43.745+05:302011-06-14T20:20:43.745+05:30kya baat hai..sundarkya baat hai..sundarमहेन्द्र श्रीवास्तवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09549481835805681387noreply@blogger.com