Desires,Aspirations
Expectations,Ambitions
Your Thirst and hunger
Can never be satisfied
Every time
You can simply
Restart or Fight
No one touches perfection
Until one sits on top
Of the hill of mistakes
With a bag of
Corrections and retakes
Somehow learned to sense
Victory in both
Hearten and deject
Numerous Trojan wars to win
Repent for all wrongs and sins
But still unsatisfied
You Look forward
Blank and Wide-eyed
Desire of "little more"
You can barely ignore
A hint, this feeling growing
In blood, in vein
with each pint.
You move again
To attain a new perfection
Just an another milestone
Added to the road of
"Satisfaction".
Unsatisfied . . .!
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ReplyDeleteYou should get your own book published.
ReplyDeletenever thought of it :P
ReplyDeleteYour peoms are really nice.Give Kiran Advice a thought and compile them.You can even do it as an ebook to either sell or give out.
ReplyDelete'can't get no satisfaction'as Mick Jagger says. But your poem was very satisfying to read.
ReplyDeletehI there,, Nice post I like To read..
ReplyDeleteso nteresting. Love it.
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Wow, your poems are beautiful and so, very poignant. I'm recalling, in clarity these times of my life through your words.
ReplyDeletewow...beautiful...
ReplyDeleteBlOgwalkiNg frieNd,, Nice to be here.. Thanks For visitIng,,
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Hey Jyoti!
ReplyDeleteNice poem ...
Thanks for the follow. I am satisfied ;) :) :D
wow really nice, I guess you have to have your own collection of this sort of thing and find a publishing house.
ReplyDeletenice piece of work
ReplyDeleteHey Sugar . . .gr8 yar so many comments. . .u gota long way dear.
ReplyDeleteNo one touches perfection
ReplyDeleteUntil one sits on top
Of the hill of mistakes
With a bag of
Corrections and retakes
Somehow learned to sense
Victory in both
Hearten and deject.....very impressive lines.awesome creation.
i would like to thank you to visit my blog and leave ur precious comment.your compilation is amazing.you r a young girl the path is long you can sit on the top of the hill of poetry.god bless you.
Jyoti pls remove the word verification from comments setting,to make convenient for the comments.
ReplyDeleteI read the first poem and then I found myself reading most of them....jyoti, a different aspect of seeing things is there in your words...go ahead and never let your emotions die at any point of your life....all the best:)
ReplyDelete@rajesh Kumari: thnx a lot mam.
ReplyDeleteI have taken yr suggestion in consideration.
@pragya: thnk u pragya !!
Nice thoughts! very rightly said !the pursuit of perfection is a path full of sacrifices , mistakes, surrender & compromises...to achieve one thing we have to leave & forget so many . thus, from a holistic perspective its impossible to achieve perfection or be satisfied by it..but its also true that if we don't have that passion, hunger , dissatisfaction there won't be any achievements at all !
ReplyDelete@rajneesh: thanks for this lovely comment !!
ReplyDeletePerfection is not an easy road for sure....... lovely poem, great rhythm.
ReplyDeleteThis insatiable lust of our race in individual capacity or in plurity is keeping the humanity ticking!
ReplyDeleteThis is realy amzaing how you put your thoughts so explicitly into words!
Very communicative!
Great one I loved it coz I completely believe in this one...similar feelings...Give me a high five ehh!
ReplyDeleteJyoti trynna read this a lil old post f mine bt m sure it will give u something...http://mani-wheniwaslostinme.blogspot.in/2011/10/i-want-to-shine-by-my-own-glow.html#comment-form ...
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Mani