Sunday, May 15, 2011

Never Satisfied...

Desires,Aspirations
Expectations,Ambitions
Your Thirst and hunger
Can never be satisfied 
Every time 
You can simply 
Restart or Fight

No one touches perfection
Until one sits on top 
Of the hill of mistakes 
With a bag of 
Corrections and retakes 
Somehow learned to sense 
Victory  in both
Hearten and deject

Numerous Trojan wars to win
Repent for all wrongs and sins 
But still unsatisfied 
You Look forward 
Blank and Wide-eyed

Desire of "little more"
You can barely ignore 
A hint, this feeling growing 
In blood, in vein
with each pint.

You move again 
To attain a new perfection 
Just an another milestone 
Added to the road of 
"Satisfaction".

23 comments:

  1. Everyone is, for sm or the othr thng

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  2. You should get your own book published.

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  3. Your peoms are really nice.Give Kiran Advice a thought and compile them.You can even do it as an ebook to either sell or give out.

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  4. 'can't get no satisfaction'as Mick Jagger says. But your poem was very satisfying to read.

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  5. hI there,, Nice post I like To read..
    so nteresting. Love it.

    visit please,,
    http://el-janhreview.blogspot.com/

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  6. Wow, your poems are beautiful and so, very poignant. I'm recalling, in clarity these times of my life through your words.

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  7. BlOgwalkiNg frieNd,, Nice to be here.. Thanks For visitIng,,

    http://el-janhreview.blogspot.com/

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  8. Hey Jyoti!
    Nice poem ...
    Thanks for the follow. I am satisfied ;) :) :D

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  9. wow really nice, I guess you have to have your own collection of this sort of thing and find a publishing house.

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  10. Hey Sugar . . .gr8 yar so many comments. . .u gota long way dear.

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  11. No one touches perfection
    Until one sits on top
    Of the hill of mistakes
    With a bag of
    Corrections and retakes
    Somehow learned to sense
    Victory in both
    Hearten and deject.....very impressive lines.awesome creation.
    i would like to thank you to visit my blog and leave ur precious comment.your compilation is amazing.you r a young girl the path is long you can sit on the top of the hill of poetry.god bless you.

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  12. Jyoti pls remove the word verification from comments setting,to make convenient for the comments.

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  13. I read the first poem and then I found myself reading most of them....jyoti, a different aspect of seeing things is there in your words...go ahead and never let your emotions die at any point of your life....all the best:)

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  14. @rajesh Kumari: thnx a lot mam.
    I have taken yr suggestion in consideration.

    @pragya: thnk u pragya !!

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  15. Nice thoughts! very rightly said !the pursuit of perfection is a path full of sacrifices , mistakes, surrender & compromises...to achieve one thing we have to leave & forget so many . thus, from a holistic perspective its impossible to achieve perfection or be satisfied by it..but its also true that if we don't have that passion, hunger , dissatisfaction there won't be any achievements at all !

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  16. @rajneesh: thanks for this lovely comment !!

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  17. Perfection is not an easy road for sure....... lovely poem, great rhythm.

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  18. This insatiable lust of our race in individual capacity or in plurity is keeping the humanity ticking!
    This is realy amzaing how you put your thoughts so explicitly into words!
    Very communicative!

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  19. Great one I loved it coz I completely believe in this one...similar feelings...Give me a high five ehh!

    Jyoti trynna read this a lil old post f mine bt m sure it will give u something...http://mani-wheniwaslostinme.blogspot.in/2011/10/i-want-to-shine-by-my-own-glow.html#comment-form ...

    Love
    Mani

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