Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Phoenix Rising


Restart, reboot, rejuvenate, refresh all signifies a fresh beginning. Keeping the past aside and starting all over again. Like a Phoenix, you wish to rise again and fly to new heights. All new, young and fresh. 
Who doesn't want this ?
We all do.


I turn my head to sky rains falling,
wash the wounds of numbness from my soul.
Turn my heart in tides of fierce renewal,
where love and rage run whole.
Come drink deep.~ Carolyn McDade

A start, to embark on all over again. 
A thought, to muse and ponder again. 
To have a fresh look 
of ideas inside.
For corrections n amends
on all that you tried.

To change the mood
n change the look. 
Untie those intricate knots 
and search
for chains to unhook.
Repaint the walls 
and refine the approach. 
all you need is a better focus 
and deeper encroach. 

These steps are vital 
for revival. 
Mistakes- your biggest rival. 
Make sure they doesn't stand a chance
this time, because.
This is the time to 
evolve n enhance. 

32 comments:

  1. Time to evolve n enhance, well said Jyoti:) Hope you are through with your exams:)

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  2. Starting afresh? Nice one. :)

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  3. lovely poem
    u are back with more energy and enthusiasm
    Thanks
    http://drivingwithpen.blogspot.in/

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  4. कविता बहुत अच्छी लगी. शुभकामनाएँ.

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  5. Beautiful as always.
    It is pleasure reading your poems.

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  6. Hey Jyoti! :)

    Excellent! full of vigor and positive thoughts! :)

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  7. Felt refreshing after reading your poems! Beautiful and thought breaking Jyoti :)

    All the best!

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  8. Jyoti,

    Yes, what you say in second stanza is so right.

    Take care

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  9. Revival must be taken at times, love the phoenix myth, great verse.

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  10. rise up from those ashes...its not how many times we fall but how many we get back up you know...smiles.

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  11. Happy to read you again. I like the image of the Phoenix, I truly think we can rise again, we can all start again.....because it is who we are evolving beings.

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  12. हर पग पर कुछ तो बढ़ना हो

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  13. i like the poem a lot, rejuvenation from reassessment.

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  14. Great thought....very inspiring .....

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  15. कल 25/05/2012 को आपकी यह पोस्ट http://nayi-purani-halchal.blogspot.in पर लिंक की जा रही हैं.आपके सुझावों का स्वागत है .
    धन्यवाद!

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  16. very thoughtful .. time for the phoenix to rise again ..


    Bikram's

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  17. Only if... there were new beginnings. I've to carry on and rebuild with old, worn out tools, and see the form regain lustre.

    Nice read.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  18. ..Jyoti is back..back with a bang... ;)

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  19. Very well said ...
    Shows the way to remove ur obstacles ...

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  20. that was lovely and fiery, liked this style :)

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  21. It is something like deep insights of the kind sages once possessed:)

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  22. Its the new beginning the rebirth of real we who we are ...to rise above the normal self ..and do something extraordinary ..

    Like the flow in post ..and yes if sum rain follows ..it will nice relief from the warning sun looking to engulf .. us..

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  23. something 2 ponder about!!!..gud 2 read u aftr a long time JOJO!!

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  24. बहुत ही बेहतरीन और प्रशंसनीय प्रस्तुति....


    इंडिया दर्पण
    पर भी पधारेँ।

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  25. Late to land in… but I guess this is cool way to begin my week :P

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  26. mistakes your rivals,
    and friends sometimes as well,
    because on the top ,
    when you look back,
    those mistakes,
    and failures are the ones.
    who actually have become your wings.

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  27. wonderful...and the pic somehow reminds me of Lord of the Rings...the last scene of the fellowship of the ring when Gandalf the Grey fell into that fireful ravine... :)

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