Be not afraid; the world is full
of noises
Of yours and mine, from time to
time!!
Talking,
exit means relief, shedding
Of
burdens and worries, light felt heart
Voice
that comes out, leaves a mark
Pathway
for the problems to follow
Then
they just ooze out.
Heart
seeks what? A congruent heart
That
catches skipped beat and skipper
Says
too little, next time a little more
Sometimes
pushes, sometimes pleads
Adjusts,
as shifts the needs.
Verbiage,
overflowed this tiny heart
Crazy
paving, then there’s highway
Speak,
talk-to-me, faces say
Patterns,
patterns so many
Public
and personal displays.
Why
interrupt when one goes on and talks
It’s
a sober job to enounce, to rant, to scream
Sometimes,
in midst of all this voiced chaos
A
mind is freed, for a while at least
Come
and go, that are worries.
Who
are we, if not we talk
With
voice or with quite
We
all take this walk.
Beautifully said!!!
ReplyDelete..your words did the talking Jyoti..message beautifully conveyed through the rich tapestry of words..keep it up.. :)
ReplyDeletethat school vala comment by me oly :p
ReplyDeleteVery well said Jyoti! I really liked the last three lines:)
ReplyDeletewho we are with or who we choose to be with will say much about our quality of life and where we get to....the walk/the talk...i am all about it...smiles.
ReplyDeleteBut let me quote Gautam Buddha dear Jyoti -he said," Listen, if you cant understand my silence how can you understand my speech ....." Sometimes even silence becomes loud!
ReplyDeleteAgain see what famous Urdu Poet Bashie Badra said-
"Mujhe ishtehaar si lagti hain, ye mohabbaton ki kahaniyan
Jo kaha nahin wo suna karo, jo suna nahi wo kaha karo"
(Loosely translated- All those so called love stories appear to me as advertisements, if in sublime state of love one should hear a saga even before it is uttered and likewise one should speak only what has not been heard " ......
Beautiful write Jyoti! The talking releases the acts of participation and encouraging more talks! Nicely!
ReplyDeleteHank
nice....very well said Jyoti !!!
ReplyDeleteanu
Away we go, choosing each, along the way we can surely teach
ReplyDeleteNo comments ... will just smile and say, thanks for the beautiful poems :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely .... a meaningful creation
ReplyDeleteTalking is sharing after all!
ReplyDeleteWords. They make or break. Sometimes silence speaks more volubly. At times words fail to convey.
ReplyDeleteTalk out your happiness vent your frustrations and express yourself through words. Very well written. :)
ReplyDeleteI just melt into your words. Seriously, that literary sigh of contentment, that was me. =)
ReplyDeleteCrystal said it best (she always says it best) 'I just melt into your words' as well. Jyoti, you crack me up. You've got it all, my friend. I'm glad you're back and doing well!
ReplyDeleteYou said it. And how well.
ReplyDeleteLovely.Your meaningful thoughts have flowed into beautiful words
ReplyDeleteLovely title .. very well said and written :)
ReplyDeleteWho are we, if not we talk
ReplyDeleteWith voice or with quite
We all take this walk.
....Wonderful...we have forgotten that sometimes silence speaks more than words...
Jyoti Mishra madam
ReplyDeleteNamaste. Very beautiful and thoughtful poem.
Jyoti Mishra madam your poems convey deep meaning which touches our heart. Jyoti Mishra madam i wish you all the best in your efforts.
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beautiful...:) a very effective and insightful write up indeed..
ReplyDeleteawesom and interesting facts...
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Magnificent!
ReplyDeleteGreat to read your observation expressed uncommonly on such a common habit.
Best lines...
“Everything is more beautiful because we’re doomed.
You will never be lovelier than you are now.
we will never be here again.”
Beautiful. ...And we find ourselves.
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