Criminals, Rapists, Thieves, Terrorists, Naxalists, Talibans you name it.... this list can result in a never ending tirade. There is no single day when you not read about them and their deleterious acts. They are equivalent to cannibalistic savages. People who never hesitate to take pure and innocent human lives for some godforsaken personal motives.
Do they deserve a human life ???
Do they really have a humane heart inside ??
They have nothing
but, a vacant box inside
Abominable lull
atrocious and vicious mind.
For the deeds they do
No repent, no redemption
exists on this earth
What they only deserve is
Ill-health and a life of dearth .
All the smiles they snatch
and all the happiness they slay
I feel pity for
those empty hearts
Through which they
mime
As if they care and pray :O
Many are repercussions
of circumstances
But few are born instances.
These lunatics and psychopaths
Can they ever justify ??
Will they able to explain
All the reasons and all the whys ?
Ohhh Alas !!
They can never
As they are insane
Devoid of neurons and veins
They have empty hearts
and I guess
They have empty brains too.
"and I guess
ReplyDeleteThey have empty brains too. "
yes exactly. and fully agreed with your thoughts in the poem.
with regards.
शानदार अभिव्यक्ति!! निसंदेह वे रिक्त दिमाग़ विकृत दिमाग़!! सार्थक संज्ञा।
ReplyDelete@सुज्ञ, @yashwant: Thank you !!
ReplyDeleteJyoti ji,by saying them of empty hearts and empty brains,you have correctly presented their inside position.But,I feel instead of emptiness they are full of dirt and poison of negativeness,hatred etc.
ReplyDeleteYou have expressed your emotions in an excellent poetic way.Congratulations.
@Rakesh Kumar: thank you sir
ReplyDeleteand yeah rightly said they are full of negativeness and crap inside.
Very nice poem
ReplyDeleteआप भी सादर आमंत्रित हैं
ReplyDeleteएक्यूप्रेशर चिकित्सा पद्धति का परिचय
ये मेरी पहली पोस्ट है
उम्मीद है पसंद आयेंगी
What they only deserve is
ReplyDeleteIll-health and a life of dearth .
Wonderful creation....what they do deserve is instant death penalty...a very heart touching poem..
वे जो हैं, सो हैं। हमारे अखबार भी उनके महिमामंडन का कोई अवसर नहीं त्यागना चाहते हैं।
ReplyDelete@kailash: By instant death they will succeed in becoming a hero for their patrons.
ReplyDeleteTherefore I guess a life full of struggle is what they deserve.
@praveen: exactly... Media fills all the gaps with more make-up and spice.
please don't include Naxalites in it.. tribal people from centuries have been deprived of their right to live and flourish as a community and now they don't have any other way to raise their voice other than the guns. Nice read :)
ReplyDelete'What they only deserve is
ReplyDeleteIll-health and a life of dearth'
Really Jyoti, the day they step on this path of terror they are devoid of health and abundance. It is true and natural. In modern times terrorism is becoming source of earning too. Isn't it ironical?
It is nice poem.
well done!
ReplyDeletelike the flow...
ये मानवता के नाम पर कलंक हैं।
ReplyDelete@rachit: This post is only for those whose actions are vicious, in no way I am trying to target a grp in particular.
ReplyDeleteThnx for the comment !!
@Bhusan: They are doomed sir
In 21st century money is everywhere, hardly a thing left which is not touched by it.
@magiceye: thank you
@manoj: I agree sir the biggest black spot !!
It is very nice poem. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyoti G
ReplyDeleteIt is unclear to me if we shall blame the criminals or people who make criminals or both...Obviously they do not heart and neither they have brains.
ReplyDeleteWelldone Jyoti dear,awesome poetry.really its very sad to think about such troublesome characters roaming around the life.you correctly said they are brainless.they are hazardous in life.
ReplyDeleteJyoti ji ...not at all evils...to be condemned.well done nice poetry.
ReplyDeletekudos to you jyoti... they re indeed danger to society...
ReplyDeleteI just dont understand human rights nowadays, I think it means something to some that most dont understand... Sigh
What they only deserve is
ReplyDeleteIll-health and a life of dearth
rightly expressed...
the heinous acts executed by them
are really condemnable
these flagitious satans are a slur on humanity
Jyoti , i agree with you 200% they don't have heart nor mind ,they are ruthless and they don't deserve to be in this humanity.Hope they will change ,is there a chance for them? shayad...
ReplyDeleteBitter truth in sweet words,
ReplyDeleteVery Good,
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Hi jyoti,
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you...nice poem!
Described well.
jyoti,hum is poem ko sirf nice poem kahkar hi nahi rah sakte...ye hamen kahin na kahin sochne par majboor karti hai...aise hi khali dil aur dimag ke logon ke karan hi na jane kitni ladkiyon ka jeevan indirectly effect hota hai..kai ladkiyon ko inki aaye din kii harkaton ki wajah se aazadi nahi mil pati..parents don't feel safe..isme unki koi galti bhi to nahi hai na...iske liye ye khali dil aur dimaag ke log hi doshi hain aur unhe saja kya milti hai...5 saal ki kaid...?
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, in too many places these kinds of people are running our governmental agencies and our society. They just cover their rapacity and animosity and greed with religion and political niceties. In the U.S., most are Republicans.
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Touching poem!
ReplyDelete@marija: thanx
ReplyDelete@A: both are equally responsible.
@rajesh kumari: thank u mam !!
@G N Shaw: thank u sir !!
@strawberry: thanx honey !!
@danish:right they r condemnable
@angel: very lil chance
@vivek: thank you
@gowthami:thank you !!
@neha: true, thanks for this lovely comment
@jacob: exactly, and for them we can do nothing :(
@erica: thank u
..yet, there are lots of issues to raise in here... but i can't blame you for having those thoughts... there may be ruthless but who are we to judge them... some of them have their own reasons for committing such act... very well penned..(:
ReplyDeleteTake care.
~Kelvin
This Touch My Hearth Thanks For These.
ReplyDelete@kelvin: I agree there can be reasons, but no reason is big or grave enough to take lives of angelic kids and crime-less people.
ReplyDelete..i respect you Jyoti, no offense... i just admired your writing...:)
ReplyDelete~Kelvin
Anger genuine and justifiable...
ReplyDeletewonderful write.
All the smiles they snatch
ReplyDeleteand all the happiness they slay
I feel pity for
those empty hearts
Through which they
mime
As if they care and pray :O
True.... Sensitive creation...
@kelvin: all fine, no hard feelings pal. Thanks again !!
ReplyDelete@preml:thank u !!
@ monika: thank u mam !!
Good topic. Those people have empty hearts and empty brains for sure
ReplyDeletegreat post...I think these people lacks brains...or rather they are just brainwashed...
ReplyDeleteVery true!
ReplyDelete♥ Leia
Alas most of them are victims themselves. Brainwashed and shown dreams of a 'jannat', or a free world or a kingdom while they don't realize that they are merely pawns.
ReplyDeleteNice post.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
I am happy to see that you write very efficiently on critical issues.
ReplyDeleteShow them the simple life.
ReplyDeleteIt's sad to think your so right, and that these people are taking over this world. I think some call it progress! ha.I call it the down turn of human kind. love the poem, but there is hope for us all still.
ReplyDeleteSee, nobody is born as criminals, talibans, rapists...
ReplyDeleteIts the situation that makes them one. I would blame it on the society for God never created a vicious soul.
Hate, vengeance and isolation doesn't help but makes the situation worse...
If their empty hearts and brains were to be filled with something else, other the fore mentioned, wouldn't be different case altogether..
I mean, this is just my opinion... everybody is entitled to their views...
Liked your abstract though... :)
keep it coming
superb!!
ReplyDeletebut corruption, law brakers are the part n parcel of life....
well scripted!!
These lunatics and psychopaths
ReplyDeleteCan they ever justify ??
Will they able to explain
All the reasons and all the whys ?
Ohhh Alas !!
They can never
So very true.
very nice post Jyoti ji
ReplyDelete@sub: yeah they r brainwashed, as they have one when they are born :D
ReplyDelete@leia: thanx
@blasphemous aesthete: true they are pawns, real monster is hidden somewhere deep.
@kunwar: Thank you sir
@honest abe: Some people are trying that, but those people can be counted on fingers.
@geoff: hope is always there !!
@nirmal: yeah u are absolutely ryt, nobody is born criminal.... circumstances make them. But what they lack is judgement b/w ryt or wrong. As I have said no reason is grave enough to take innocent lives.
Thanks for this lovely comment. These topics are debatable and its good that we are discussing it.
@mukesh: yeah they are and its high time now to get rid of them.
@Asha: thanks !!
@sonu: thanks !!
सच कहा है आपने ज्योति जी आभार
ReplyDeleteEmpty hearts is an apt way to describe it, Jyoti. Unfortunately, I can completely relate because here in Peru, the front page of the newspaper almost always displays death in some way. We are the only ones who can make positive changes for the world!
ReplyDeleteThanks for bringing this topic up, Jyoti!
u wrote really well!! but alias no one can change them as they are even deprieved of human sentiments....:)
ReplyDeletesach me, bahut sundhar rachana
ReplyDeletegood......It is very nice poem. Well done....
ReplyDeleteJyoti, very well written and kind of represents all that we citizens feel about such people. Keep writing....
ReplyDeletev well written ... keep writing !! u hv a new follower !!!
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Hate consumes us, love redeems us.
ReplyDeleteJyoti the humain rights activists will come out if you say "naxalites and their kins are insane ,bereft of the basic quantum of brain the neuron and grey matter .".This is the real problem of our times .Our parliament is an amalgam of tainted MPz .They say the guilt is yet to be proved ,till such times they are innocent .
ReplyDeleteThanks for you thought provoking posts written with a command and modern metaphor .Congratulations.
I feel the same about these criminals who have ugly minds with vicious thoughts! You expressed it so well... I could never! btw Love the title. 'empty hearts' so opt and so much better than 'no heart'. Keep up the good work!
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Well i think that this post has a other side too i will try to look at it and if i can come up with something worth a read i will let you know for sure...
ReplyDeleteI agree with you wholeheartedly!! They will never get any sympathy or compassion from me, people can change but this group of vile creatures deserve what they dished upon the victims. Well said my friend!!!
ReplyDeleteJyoti..you took on a very big subject and spoke it well. In many ways, because of the depravity of the few, the world as a whole has been sinking to the lowest common denominator. The global connection has given them so much airspace. Those you spoke of and governments all around the world play humanity like a giant chess game..all in the guise of Religion, Power,Greed, and just pure anger and hate..the need to dominate. They send one message...but we can send another...that will be our job. Karma, your reap what you sew...would not want to be in their shoes.....
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ReplyDeleteGood poetic post Jyoti!..but why to waste God gifted poetic talent
ReplyDeleteon such darker sides of humanity when there are many brighter ones to fresh the pen.Its what I feel a kind of misdirection to a
talent like yours! My expectations are high from you..just dont fall a prey to all such kind of writings so prevalent in blogosphere.
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ReplyDelete@sawai: thank u
ReplyDelete@samantha: Its not only in Peru its here too, magnitude may differ.
@nashtare: yeah true said. thanks
@mahendra: thank you
@prasann: thank u
@shail: thank u mam
@rids: thank u rids !!
@Matt: I agree with you, but some ppl don't care abt redemption
@sachin: thank u
@veerubhai: thank u sir for this lovely comment
@shruti: thnks honey !!
@anmol: thanks !!
@david: thank u pal !!
@raven: true said, we should play our part nicely.
@arvind: thank u sir for this lovely comment. I'll keep your advise in time ahead.
fabulously and very well written.
ReplyDeleteWell said Jyoti ji ! Beautifully written marvelous creation.
ReplyDeletevaise to before this comment
ReplyDelete70 comments tells the story of this poem
i just wana say that ...u are a superb writer
iam following ur blog
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Hmmmmm,that was very nice and very sensitive.
ReplyDeleteReally very meaningful creation, Jyoti.
ReplyDeleteI Congratulate you. God bless you.
Can they ever justify ?? as u said never ! thought provoking !
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, this people still have a soul, a heart and a mind.
ReplyDeleteThere may just be an underlying reason why do such things.
Great Words Jyoti!
I think they're just misunderstood????
ReplyDeletelol on a serious note
they are just psychologically confused and can't handle how life is treating them.
Their purpose might be clean, but the means aren't
sad fact for reality
xx,
Toni
wonderful presentation .......
ReplyDeleteI didnt know you were a poet :). A contemporary one at that. Nice!!!
ReplyDelete'All the smiles they snatch
and all the happiness they slay'. How they manage to sleep at night I cant fathom...
Congrats on a meaningful, well written creative writing. It's my pleasure to visit your blog.thanks.
ReplyDeleteफीलिंग्स बहुत टचिंग हैं.लिखो,लिखो,और लिखो.हर नया क्रिएशन ओल्ड से बैटर होता है.
ReplyDeleteof course they neither have heart nor mind......... nice thoughts.
ReplyDeletehey nice blog..
ReplyDeletejyoti ji
ReplyDeletemain neha ji ki baat se puri tarah sahmat hun.ham sabhi in kadvi sachchaiyoe se roj hi rubaru hote hain .par bas padha kar dekh sunkar rah jaate hain jabki aisa nahi hona chahiye.
sabhi mahan hastiyo ne apne -apne vichar prastut kiye hain aur vo sarahniy bhi hain.bahut si yojnaaye banti hain aur pfir aage ki karvaai salo -saal chalti rahti hain .midiya wale bhi kam doshi nahi hain isko badhava dene me.inki suraxha ke liye bhi yojnaaye bani ,par kahan tak bani ya abhi filo ke beech panne dabe hue hain .bhi! itni badi yojanako pura karne samay to lagega hi .ab ye unke haath me hai ki ---is beech hajaaron kisankhya me stri luti rahe barbaad hoti rahe ,apni jida lash liye marne ki ghadi ke intjaar me vivash hai,.
par kaam to ho raha hai na------------;)
ek bahut hi nihayat kadam jis par sakar ko uthani chahiye ,us vishay ko dil ke andar se kafi bariki se mahsus karke bahut bahut hi betreen v aankhe khol dene wali is marvelous
poem ki liye
dil se bahut bahut badhai
dhanyvaad
poonam
these are not "random scribblings" but well thought pouring of your inner concerns for the society. well versed......
ReplyDeletethis poem reminds me of the event in 9/11 and the gassing of the Jews. Both event involves empty-headed, angry individuals who harm innocent people for no specific reason.
ReplyDelete@Kiran: thank u
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@rajneesh: yeah they can nevr
@lifestyle: as I've said b4 will say it agn no reason is grave enough to take innocent lives.
@toni: exactly means are not.
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@poonam: thank u for this lovely comment.
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@cubic: yeah empty-headed nutcases.
Nobody is bad. Everybody is good. It is just what they do that it bad. People can change.
ReplyDeleteनाइस पोयम।
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ब्लॉग समीक्षा का 17वाँ एपीसोड।
Jyoti,
ReplyDeleteI could not have put it any better. It is so true.
Take care
Yes, they have empty hearts. If they had experienced love, they could never hurt innocent people.
ReplyDeleteI pity them.
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ReplyDelete@dhruva: okeah, but its damn tough to change them.
ReplyDelete@Rajneesh: thank u
@jack: thank u
@harshad:true sir
@honey:thank u
@upendra: thank u. I'll surely visit u.
My philosophy of life differs from you a bit.
ReplyDeleteThe criminals according to me are definitely hate-worthy, but they are not devoid of human sentiments.
The simple fact is some are capable of hiding their traits, keeping them to the permissible limit while others fall prey to their one flawed quality, which can be anything, money for corrupt, lust for rapist, misinterpretations for terrorists etc.
I saw too much rage here, which is good to show but not good to hold on to.
.....शानदार अभिव्यक्ति!!
ReplyDeleteकई दिनों व्यस्त होने के कारण ब्लॉग पर नहीं आ सका
ReplyDelete@alive: I agree wid u and I'm not holding it.
ReplyDelete@sanjay: thank u sir !!
I'm not sure anyone knows why some people turn out to be psychopaths or sociopaths, lacking most semblances of empathy or even humanity. They are a scourge on the earth, however.
ReplyDeleteSome of their insanity derives from religion, I believe, and the god(s) in which they believe.
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